A request that was almost perfect
Last Thursday night an operator in Quebec sent us a golf holiday quote request for two clients. A couple, seven nights on the Pacific coast of Panama, 5 to 12 March 2027. Double room, all-inclusive, return transfers from Rio Hato. And the golf came with something few requests include: the five playing dates, one by one, and the tee time they wanted each morning.
It was one of the cleanest requests we have had this autumn. Someone had clearly sat down with the clients and written what they actually wanted, not what a booking form usually asks for.
With that on the desk, the price looks like a ten-minute job. Room, golf, transfer, add it up.
It wasn’t. The hotel came back with a one-line question: «Are the five rounds per person, so ten in total?»
The request said «5 rounds of golf». For two guests. Read quickly, that is five tee times. Read by the golf desk, it could be five or ten. Which means the golf element is either half or double.
That started a week of short emails. By the end of it, something happened with the flights and with a date nobody expected. I will come back to it at the end, because it is the part that decides whether a quote survives all the way to the invoice.
Where a golf holiday quote breaks
We build golf prices for operators and agents across five destinations, from the Caribbean to Madrid and the Canaries. The pattern is almost boring in how often it repeats. The number your client receives rarely goes wrong because of the rate. It goes wrong because of something nobody wrote down.
There are five places. Always the same five.
1. Who plays, and how often
«Price for two» does not tell you how many golfers there are. It might be a couple who both play every day. It might be one golfer and one beach person. It might be one golfer and one who «might join on Wednesday».
In the Quebec file the answer came back in under two hours: both play, all five rounds. Ten tee times. Once that line was in writing, nothing else in the price moved.
The same week, a Spanish agency asked us to price New Year at Casa de Campo® for a family of four, 28 December to 2 January. Parents and grown-up children, with a villa in mind. One of the four plays, three courses, with rental clubs. The other three will not touch a club.
If that line does not arrive in writing, the quote gets built for four golfers or for none. Both versions are wrong, and both look fine in a PDF.
The same request had a second catch. Over those dates the villas carry a seven-night minimum stay. The family wanted five. Nothing to do with rates. Just a condition that, if nobody checks it first, shows up after the client has already said yes.
2. Taxes: included, excluded, or «it depends»
Every destination writes this differently. Some hotels quote with taxes, some without. Some golf courses publish their trade rate with taxes added on a small line at the bottom of the email.
The most expensive word in our trade is «net». Net of commission, yes. Net of tax? That depends on who typed it.
For the Quebec couple we asked the hotel for one thing: the total, taxes included, confirmed in writing. It arrived on Sunday night. On Monday the operator had the same figure we had already sent, now with the hotel’s confirmation behind it.
3. What sits outside the price
Every quote has a border. What is inside and what is outside. The outside is never the problem. The problem is when it is not written.
For Quebec, the Rio Hato transfer came as a separate price, on its own line in the same email. For the New Year family, the rental clubs for the one golfer and the New Year’s Eve dinner the client had already spotted on the resort’s website.
Buggies, caddies, clubs, transfers between courses, a special dinner on a specific night. None of them is expensive next to the whole trip. All of them are expensive when they appear on the invoice without having been on the quote.
It is the same reason a cheaper screenshot from the client usually is cheaper: it leaves things out. We looked at that in golf package price comparison, when your client finds it cheaper online.
4. The tee time is not the same every day
This one does not change the price. It changes the promise, which can cost more.
The Quebec couple wanted to play around 8:00 every morning. The course confirmed 8:00 on four of the five days. On the Saturday, the first slot available for visitors was 10:00.
Two hours. For a couple who have planned their day around golf, it is the difference between lunch on the beach and lunch in the cart.
We told the operator before sending the price, not after. The clients decided with everything in front of them. If you want the longer version of what you can and cannot promise on tee times, it is in tee time confirmation for golf groups.
5. How long the number is valid
Every hotel price has an expiry date, written or not. In Quebec, the hotel would hold the room without guarantee until 22 January 2027. That went into the second email, before the price, so the operator knew how long the clients had to think.
The payment deadline is a different date altogether. More on that below.
Net, margin and the line your client never sees
For the New Year family we did something agencies do not always ask for: we sent the quote with the margin already worked out, so the agent could see at a glance what to add when charging the client. Golf for the one player only, as requested.
It is not a favour. It is what lets a smaller agency price a product it is selling for the first time without guessing.
When the net arrives clean, with what is in and what is out, the margin stops being a bet. The agent knows what goes on top and knows it will not be eaten in February. When the net arrives half-finished, the margin turns into a cushion for whatever might appear. And a big cushion prices you out.
If you have ever counted the hours it takes to rebuild a quote that moved, you already know why this matters. We put numbers on it in golf group profitability, the twenty hours nobody bills.
The five-line sheet that now travels with every golf quote
This is what now sits under every price we send, whether it is Panama, Madrid, Lanzarote, Playa Granada or Casa de Campo®. Five lines below the number. It works the same for two guests or for forty.
- Who plays. Number of golfers and non-golfers. Rounds per golfer, not per room.
- Taxes. Included or not, in one word. And whether the price is confirmed in writing by the hotel or the course.
- Outside the price. Transfers, clubs, buggies, caddies, gala dinners, date supplements. One line each.
- Tee times. Confirmed time per day. Any day that differs (Saturdays, holidays, tournaments) written separately.
- Dates. Option without guarantee, payment deadline, free cancellation. Three dates, not one.
It is not really a sheet for the operator. It is a sheet for the operator’s client. You forward it as it is, and your client reads in one minute what used to turn up on the invoice.
What happened with the flights, and with one date
When the Quebec operator confirmed that both were playing, there was one more sentence at the end, almost in passing: the flights had already been booked and confirmed.
Perfectly normal. The clients knew their dates and flights do not wait. But it meant one thing. From that point on, any change at the hotel could no longer be solved by moving the trip.
On Sunday night the hotel confirmed the price in writing, taxes included, without changing a single figure. And it moved one date. The deadline to confirm and pay, which the first email had set for 26 February, became 22 January. A month earlier.
We sent it to the operator first thing on Monday, in three lines. Price confirmed, one thing changes, here is the new date.
Nothing broke. Now picture that change discovered on 20 February, with the flights paid and the clients thinking they had another month.
A golf holiday quote does not hold because of the rate. It holds because someone reads the last line of every hotel email and passes it on before it turns into a problem.
Got a golf quote half-built on your desk?
If you have a request sitting there and you are not sure the number will hold until the invoice, email me at info@globalhemisphere.com with the request exactly as your client sent it. I will send it back with the five lines filled in for that destination, and tell you what is still worth asking before the price goes out.
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